#Nanowrimo Day 21: Frewyn's Glory
Well, the 50,000 word marker has been achieved. Onto the next 50,000. In the meantime, here is a piece from Draeden and Bryeison's return from the Galleisian War Saga:
The season was in its heightened state of alteration: the
verdant hues of a lingering summer giving way to the golden flush of autumn,
the trees blushing with ripened drupes, the ground misted over with glistening
rime, leaves furnishing the forests with their vibrant hues, the bark of the
various trees glowing numinous in the soft morning light, the end of the
harvest bowing to the reign of winter impending. Here
was autumn in its ripening bloom, and there harvest and the beginning of the
Frewyn High Holidays were prepared to surmount the kingdom. The frosts
delicately garlanded the boughs of the subdued landscape, the last intimations
of moss raged tranquil against the dampening frosts, the withies of the weeping
willows laden with light snow mantled over the ground, the great oaks wreathed
the canopies of the wood, the flecks of sunlight pervading the slender cracks
between. Here was all the splendor of Frewyn’s hardiest season, and there was
nothing to do but stand atop the Tyr Bryn and admire the rippling downs and distant
crags. The ocher of the dying leaves canvassed against the northern black rocks,
the dormant tilth blanketed with their amber tones crumbled over the tumbling
cliffs, the deep hue of the mere in the quiet beyond subduing all the
adornments of gold and green, the majesty of the neighboring mountains, masters
of all they surveyed, their quiet ascendancy felt in every knell, in every vale,
in every recess, supplied Bryeison and Draeden with a wealth of sensations.
Here was all Frewyn’s sovereignty: the peaks presiding over the west stood,
unyielding, artless, and uncompromising, all their influence in their formidable
forms; the lapping shores at the coastline tinkling with musical waters
crashing melodious as they danced and dashed against the rocks; the vastness of
the rising wood, the trees defying nature’s commander to retract and retreat,
their verdant spines balancing the weight and glistening ornamentation to spite
the coming season. They saw themselves in the land, Bryeison all unshakable
confidence and tranquility, and Draeden all voluble and joyous vibration.
Studying the kingdom in all its triumph, resonating its vibrant and unsubtle thrum,
as they stood on Tyr Bryn, they felt the full extent of their magnanimous
inheritance. Frewyn herself was all their glory, and the modest reception she
granted for their return home- her misted peaks, her luxuriant valleys, her
hedgerows, her stone borders, tilled earth- was all their reward. Though they
could not see Diras Castle from Tyr Bryn, they felt the added exhilaration of
knowing that the marl of integrity on their nation lie somewhere beyond the
drifting sprays, billowing down from the skies and wafting out to the roaring
seas. It was there, the king was
eagerly awaiting their arrival, and they would have hastened to the capital
were it not for the prospect before them. They tapered their gazes, trying to
distinguish more of Frewyn’s moving beauties, descrying the sundry of gradual
motion made without any provocation: the languid genuflection of the trees, the
dulcet ripples of the lake, the lilt of the passing gales, the rise and fall of
the gorm gliding overhead.
“She is
astounding,” Draeden breathed, his eye following the lines of the mountains. “I
could barely leave her, and now that I see her after having been willfully
parted, I should never suffer to leave her again.”
Bryeison
marveled at the prospect, his lips curling in wistful smiles. All his sanguine
reverie was in returning home again, in returning to the keep, in being under
Dorrin’s graces, in seeing Vyrdin, in resuming to all his former simpler joys:
reconciling his senses and resigning himself to tea, games of Fidchell,
participating in the coming harvest, and in relishing the king’s kind auspices
once more. “The Great Lady of the Southern Continent,” he exhaled, his
countenance tranquil and wondering, “and yet you can enter her valleys without
being anxious.”
Draeden
gave him a flat look. “I’m allowed,” he petulantly protested. “You should
attest that a land doesn’t answer back when spoken to or of, but would that every
lady of ample mounds and fine prospect answer with such endearing mumurations
as Frewyn herself can do.” He let out a most doting sigh. “There is my lady,
Bryeison,” he mused, gesturing toward the kingdom’s abundance. “And when one is
borne to such devoted glory as this, all the beauties of fine lace and blushing
smiles are a pale imitation to the natural wonders of the Gods.”
Bryeison
would have attested to Draeden’s being afraid of women without all the
hindrances of lace and pearls, but he checked himself and let it pass. A
knowing simper was all that he expressed, and they remained at Tyr Bryn looking
down at Frewyn’s glories with rapturous spirits and high glee until Draeden’s
stomach began to rumble.
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